Treaties for submission | Britannia

JD

(Emperor JD)

Canada
Edmonton
Alberta

This is just a first draft; not very fancy yet.
I'm looking for some feedback on these documents I'm working on so players (especially new ones) can be reminded of the differences between each submission and what the terms of the submissions are.
Please provide comments. I'll be updating and uploading a new version with graphics, etc later.

Posted Mon Oct 11, 2010 4:05 am
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Daniel Cristofani

(the majestic moose)

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What's the part about "cannot attack the Romans or other nations that have submitted or will submit to the Romans"? There's no sure way to predict that (say) the Welsh "will submit" to the Romans. The rule is just that other submitted nations cannot attack them after they do.

Posted Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:02 pm
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JD

(Emperor JD)

Canada
Edmonton
Alberta

Thanks for pointing that out. I retyped these a while ago and have yet to upload v.2 which is a lot easier to read. Will do so asap.
What I meant by "or will submit" is "who later submit."

Posted Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:02 pm
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Alan Richbourg

(chargetheguns)

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I seez u be makin ur beeg move

The Belgae cannot submit again after they automatically unsubmit in turn 1. So one condition for their submitting to the Romans is that it is the Romans 1st turn.

Posted Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:32 am
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JD

(Emperor JD)

Canada
Edmonton
Alberta

Thanks. I says it is round 1 and the Roman's turn so isn't that the same? Going to upload v 2 now which I think is much clearer. Thank you to the people who read it and offered comments.

Edited Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:58 pm
Posted Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:53 pm
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Alan Richbourg

(chargetheguns)

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I seez u be makin ur beeg move

Ack I was reading Brigantes and thinking Belgae. My bad.

Posted Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:50 pm
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