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Pola01 Pola01
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I am working on the artwork for the box for my game.
Here are the first draw, what you think about it?, what is missing?, and what can be done better?

 



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fightcitymayor
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It's tough to make out the title with all of the crazy flag backgrounds going on within each letter.

And the main image is kind of dark.

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Paul DeStefano
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fightcitymayor wrote:
It's tough to make out the title with all of the crazy flag backgrounds going on within each letter.

And the main image is kind of dark.



Very correct on both points.

I had no idea that even WAS lettering at first.
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Danilo
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I'm not an designer, but I guess that if you replace the background texture with the the map of the region of coral sea, maybe could be better.

Nice work.
 
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Pola01 Pola01
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ok thanks for your input, i will redo it.
About the darkness of the picture... it is not dark on my screen.

stay cool

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Pola01 Pola01
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What about now?



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Barry Kendall
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I think it looks good.

At first I had doubts, but the presence of a Yamato-class battleship on the cover conveys the idea that the game has the potential for more than a long-distance carrier duel which, given the photos of components on the game site, appears to be correct.
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Pola01 Pola01
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Haha that was exactly what I'm trying to illustrate with the picture, glad you like it, i will stay on this path. Thanks and stay cool

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