Alex Atkins
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Hi All

I am seeking as many play testers as possible to test my game Tio Dynasties.

Link to the rules download: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/nvk1nh13cj7mnra/AACRLSjfvGjcJqBU3...

Here is my other Boardgamegeek post about the game.
http://boardgamegeek.com/article/18747143#18747143


Please feel free to message me with any questions and suggestions for improvements would be most helpful.

Thank you
Alex

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Hi guys really looking for a few of you to help out
 
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John "Omega" Williams
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Cant download or copy-aste text examples so so here just a quick glance over and something spotted.

Page 3: Formatting error. Probably irrelevant to the final form but on the off chance its relevant.

Quote:
Atsuna Period ended. The atsuna Clan now with-
out
a ruler of age and in dismay take home in


Page 4 is blank

Typo page 5 Wafuto entry,

Quote:
militaryexpertise and ruthlessness
and another in the next paragraph.

Atsua entry: might want to replace gamer with player.

The Other Clans entry. Typo at the bottom.

Quote:
These are show in yellow,


Page 7: A visual observation. The font on the example card. The "o"
looks like an "a" and at first glance read Silver Fax Shrine. And the "B" looks like a "G", so at a glance read Ganus and so on.
Might want to consider a different font.

Page 9: The wording on capturing a shrine is a little odd on the rules for capturing enemy shrines. Seems to read that either you cannot claim a shrine until it is neutral. Or it reads that you cannot gain the benefit until 2 turns have passed?

Page 10: You switch between using the term token and coin. Might want to stick to one or the other to lessen confusion as it can read as if there is both.

That was it. The combat section seems a fraction verbose/redundant. But otherwise was fine as was.
 
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Thanks for that. I forgot to mention it is the rough draft and will be re-edited upon completion.
 
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Post started off with saying "Not a playtest yet. But here are some things spotted." but got lost.

Page 9 was the hitch. After puzzling that out seems ok.
 
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Omega2064 wrote:
Post started off with saying "Not a playtest yet. But here are some things spotted." but got lost.

Page 9 was the hitch. After puzzling that out seems ok.


Updated the issues you found.
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Rules Updated!
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/dthupkmu38cqhvv/AACvcJtoc6XgArtfc...
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Hey guys!

Message me on FB if you want to get more information about play testing or get a skype conversation to teach you how to play!
https://www.facebook.com/alex.atkinson.98
 
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Just and FYI The updated rules Dropbox link didn't work getting a 404
 
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MrGeekabyte wrote:
Just and FYI The updated rules Dropbox link didn't work getting a 404
I think it is fixed now.
 
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