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Tom Stasiak
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This is how the items from the contest look like!



https://www.boardgamegeek.com/thread/1376540/item-card-desig...

I would like to give the originators an opportunity to change the flavor text.
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Jacob Peck
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Looking nice!

Just a heads up -- it's not common to have apostrophes in ordinals in English, i.e. use 1st, 2nd, 3rd instead of 1'st, 2'nd, 3'rd.
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Mark Bigney
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On the axe, it should read "+1 Damage to all targets of your Melee attack".
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Tom Stasiak
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Corrected. Note that the content is scheduled for a check by native English proof reader, so errors like this are unlikely in the final product.
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Scott Arnone
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The art on the axe is magnificent!

As for the flavor text, I'll get some opinions from in here.

for Jar of Bees, I'm thinking:
"At least they aren't wasps, right?"

and for the axe:
"Let me see your inner goblin."
"Consider the contract signed. IN BLOOD."
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John James
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Great Ax- Let me show you the crimson splendor of your true personality.
 
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Nick Herman
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+1 for "Let me see your inner goblin"

Suggestion for Jar of Bees:
...bsssss - crack - BSSSSSSS...
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