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Tobias Loeffler
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Hi all,

I couldn't let go of the comic idea and over the last days, I've started to work on a concept. The first "Chapter" is based on the "Stolen Treasure" quest. This is a first test page:



What do you think? Any help, suggestions, ideas welcome! Thank you!
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It looks good, I was entertained.

Cheers!
 
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Keep going +1
 
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Great start! cool
 
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I read "Don't call me that!" before "Towelface" since I read left-to-right more than top-to-bottom. Dunno if anyone else had that problem. Maybe move the Towelface over more to the left and put the "Don't call me that!" lower and righter, maybe even somewhere around her legs?
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EverywhereGames wrote:
I read "Don't call me that!" before "Towelface" since I read left-to-right more than top-to-bottom. Dunno if anyone else had that problem. Maybe move the Towelface over more to the left and put the "Don't call me that!" lower and righter, maybe even somewhere around her legs?

Yeah, I see what you mean. I don't have much comic experience but my understanding was, that dialog works from top to bottom rather than from left to right?

I'll move his bubble further down in any case! Thanks for the feedback.
 
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Tobias Loeffler
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Very creative, Tobias! I found this blog on Comic writing that may help you (or point you to other links) in case this becomes a regular thing for you.

BTW, nice bases on your Myth characters!
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Tobias Loeffler
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Mistermannindy wrote:
Very creative, Tobias! I found this blog on Comic writing that may help you (or point you to other links) in case this becomes a regular thing for you.

BTW, nice bases on your Myth characters!

Thanks for the link, MM! Although I'm not sure how "regular" this will become... it's a lot of work and consumes a lot of time...

My biggest "problem" atm are the fixed posses of the minis. Looking through the 4 pages, I imagine it gets boring pretty fast (there is only so much you can do with close-ups or different angles. The female Soldier is particulary difficult).
Nethertheless, props and some additonal minis aside I want to stay within the bounderies the game defines. So no additional graphics, backgrounds whatever.
I'm curious as well, where this experiments leads. In any case, I'll finish "Stolen Treasure". I'm really curious how the combat scence will work / look!

Thanks for your kind words and encouragement!

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