Have a Kickstarter project launching tomorrow (aaah!) and am still not happy with the title image. Any advice?
My first comment is that you should have the title be above the info graphics (free shipping, price) or make them smaller. The way I see the image now, I think they are too dominant. The price, in particular, seems to be written in a font that is only slightly smaller than the main title.
Otherwise, it looks good. I think this placement is what you are seeing and being unhappy with, perhaps.