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I have a rules document that I think has all of the necessary rules in it, however I can't figure out what order to put the sections in.

The doc is here.

If anyone is willing to read through it and tell me what order they think the sections should be in, I would appreciate it.

The rules document is 8 pages right now, and the game is a cooperative tableau building game where players try to save the world from aliens by building giant attack robots.

As you are doing that, if you want to comment on any other problems with the wording, images, etc. I would be happy to hear them, but the main purpose of this run through is to get things in a logical order.
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I'll be happy to take a look for you, give me a couple of days to get round to it.
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Thanks! I look forward to seeing your edits
 
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Sorry for the delay Mike, Christmas and stuff. Just had a look now, made a couple of suggestions for things that could be moved, and a fair number of general suggestions/queries. Hope that's useful to you, Giant Robots FTW!
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No problem, Joe. I understand that things take time sometimes.

Thanks for your edits! They are excellent! I really appreciate the time that you spent looking over the rules. I have tried to fix what I could (in my brief before going to work time), and I will do more during my lunch break.
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