The artwork's good...but the dialogue not so much.
Shades of Robin's inane exclamations, Batman.
I agree with Paul. Also, some of the scenes/transitions seem disjointed and for me, are hard to follow. However, please take that with a grain of salt as I'm not a comics fan in general.
I think the mingling of the modern/hip characters and language seem out of place. I think it should either be a modern tale or an ancient tale. The mixing of the two is confusing and detracts from the story/quality.