1) The first event in the list is a bit "odd" if the Black Hand is not in the game. A Ravager appears at O9. Does it just sit there if there is Black Hand player?
See the rules for Masterless Zealots on page 13 last segment:
If there is no Black Hand player, put 2 Black Hand AMs in the cup during the Cleanup phase (3.5) and the Zealots may start acting by themselves on their next activation. Masterless Zealots will always move towards the closest enemy unit, following the fastest route, and will attack (5.0) as soon as the target is in normal range and LOS. Zealots will not move away as long as they already have an enemy unit in normal range and LOS.
2) Am I reading the VP allocation correctly?
VP-R = points for each unit that was reduced
VP-D = points for each that was defeated