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Paul DeStefano
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Re: Harpy - Criticism welcome! (Macro - The Micro Card Game)
Its unclear what the 'bra' is made of.

No ground...

I'd like to see more detail on the legs.

Pencil work needs cleaning, although size of the final may determine how much.

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Re: Harpy - Criticism welcome! (Macro - The Micro Card Game)
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character concept piece more than anything


In that case, feathered flying things need longer tails, and it would be cool if avian features extended more on the body and in the face and not just the feather skirt and egg bra to cover the naughty bits.
 
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Re: Harpy - Criticism welcome! (Macro - The Micro Card Game)
3XXXDDD wrote:
What I mean is this is much more of a character concept piece more than anything. This character is going to have a various amounts of backgrounds and poses to go along with it once the initial design is completed.

In that case, you probably want to have multiple views: what the character will look like from the front, side, back and top. You will want the pose to be very formal and static - arms out, legs out - so that you can know what every part of her body will look like and there isn't any guess-work when you are creating the card art.
 
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Re: Harpy - Criticism welcome! (Macro - The Micro Card Game)
Looks good other than all the little David Darigans plastered all over the piece. Might impact your sales a little... whistle

From an artists viewpoint. The wings look a bit too small for the body mass. Extend them out one more feather spread and should be good. Its a minor quibble. But it helps the overall appearance.
 
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