[I posted this in the Chit Chat forum, but then realised it belonged here.]
Hey all you gurus of rules... if you have a few moments I could use your help. I can offer GeekGold tips as a token of my appreciation.
I'm trying to finalize the rulebook for All For One (http://www.boardgamegeek.com/game/20941). The rules are set, I just want to get the format down a little better and make sure the rules are clear and not confusing or more complicated than they need to be.
In the game entry (linked above), there is a ruleset posted. There's another version, a more technical one, which can be viewed here:
Please take a look and tell me what you think. I prefer a more technical, rulebooky version to the one in the database, but I don't want it to be completely boring either. The most important thing is for it to be complete and correct.
Thanks for the help,